The rhythm and rhyme work, but "mild" doesn't seem quite the right word for God's mercy. Nor "wild"--I'm afraid the rhyme will have to be lost.
I've been meaning to read "A Severe Mercy." That seems closer--though maybe "uncompromising" is better.
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I thin I wrote about this. Let me check.
Yes, I did. https://assistantvillageidiot.blogspot.com/2014/11/meek-and-mild.html
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